Why I Want to Go on Horouta Te Waka
Dear Chiefs, I am writing to you because there has been a lot of arguing about who will go on the waka and you won’t. Honestly I think I should go on the waka. Here are my 5 reasons.
1 I will do well on adventures and to Explore
Firstly I would like to go on the waka because I want to explore new lands with maybe new animals, fruit and food and nature. Also I can learn about new things like languages and nature, and teach other children about the new languages and nature.
2 I am the best navigator and can help navigate
Secondly I am the best navigator in Hawaiki because I am the only one who can navigate the stars, clouds, birds, tides and currents and the shallowness. Also I will help the waka go in the right direction and keep away from big waves and storms.
3 I am a good fisher and cook
Thirdly I am a good fisherman so I can catch the right fish like King fish, Snapper, Rainbow trout, Marlin and Salmon. I am also a good cook because everyday I have a plan for breakfast, lunch and dinner. Also my favorite dish which everyone in hawaiki loves is crumbed Snapper with squid rings, salad, tomatoes and chopped apples.
4 I am a good builder and knot tier
Fourthly you would want me on the waka because if the waka breaks I can fix it in less than 15 mins so the waka would be all fixed before it sinks. Also if one of the big knots breaks I can build a bigger and stronger knot to make the waka stronger and faster.
5 I am muscular and quick
Finally you will want me on the waka because I am muscular and quick so I can carry heavy things on and off the waka in a quick time. Also I am a good swimmer so if someone gets overboarded I can quickly save them so no one will drown cause I will be quick enough to save them.
Conclusion
So do you think I’m good enough to go travel on the waka after you have read this. Cause I know you will say yes cause aren't you a good chief, or are you.
Hi Reuben I like your writing it is really cool. But maybe could you not under line the reason.
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DeleteHi Reuben I really like the way you did you Horouta waka nice video maybe can you make the font littler please.
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Okay Levi S I will do that next time.
DeleteHi Reuben. I think that you should go on the Waka because you have 5 reason. But you said at the start you have three reasons so you probaly need to go through and check. Anais
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DeleteHi Reuben you're writing is very good I could read it very clearly although like Anais said and they said you said you had three reasons and the start and you put in five reasons.
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